Hollandus Landing Chapter 412: Earl McRae part VII

The next day, I managed to meet up with some good friends to be a test group.

I had printed a copy of the first draft and I saw someone who was awake in the morning.

“Hey, Jacob.”

“What’s up, mate?”

“You got a few minutes?” I handed him my script. “I worked on this last night.”

“Sure, Earl. I’ll take a look at it.” He then read a bit to himself as he skimmed through it.

“Alright. So what do you think?”


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