The next day, I managed to meet up with some good friends to be a test group.
I had printed a copy of the first draft and I saw someone who was awake in the morning.
“Hey, Jacob.”
“What’s up, mate?”
“You got a few minutes?” I handed him my script. “I worked on this last night.”
“Sure, Earl. I’ll take a look at it.” He then read a bit to himself as he skimmed through it.
“Alright. So what do you think?”
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