Hollandus Landing Chapter 413: Earl McRae part VIII

Jacob handed me back the script. “You know, I’m not used to reading movie scripts.”

“Yeah, sorry about that.” I per-emptively apologized .

“But what you have is interesting with this short film.” Jacob continued. “I like how you’ve got that realistic fantasy story going on.”

“Thanks. Anything I need to work on?”

“I’d say some more character development for that princess character if you want to change a few things.”

“How so?”

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