Hollandus Landung Chapter 414: Earl McRae part IX

“Well, I’d say to make her more of a human character because she unintentionally comes across as more supernatural than expected. I know there’s some magical elements, but just tone it down a bit.” Jacob suggested.

Hmm…he had a point. There’s only so much I can do without special effects.

“Thank you. I’ll keep that in mind.” I told him.

“No problem. I’m glad to have read your script.”

That was great. I’ll edit it, but I wonder how she would feel about this script.


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