I tousled my slightly shaggy reddish brown hair as I tried editing my script.
Sure, it was the first draft, so there were going to be some flaws. How was I going to make Maiara more human?
Please don’t tell me Jacob was implying that she was a Mary Sue. I’d smack myself before resorting to writing bad characters like that. They belong in crappy fanfiction.
I then got random thoughts as I was fixing the dialog and the action in this script…