Hollandus Landing Chapter 416: Earl McRae part XI

Let’s see what needed to be changed…

4. INT. CHAPEL. DAY

Maiara is running towards the altar. There’s the priest who’s already in the sanctuary who was reading some of the scriptures.

FATHER OLIVIER
Princess, what brings you over here?

MAIARA
We need to evacuate the kingdom! There are demonic forces headed this way. Your cathedral can hold the citizens and secure them from this imminent danger.
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Okay, maybe that was a bit much. I have to change it to something more realistic like having the cathedral holding some of the population while there’s a task force ready to prevent the kingdom from siege. Yeah, that could work.

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